Nelson Rockingham’s Smut Vault Apprenticeship

(This edition of the Smut Vault brings in a new character. Locked behind the double steel doors of the windowless room of debauchery, Nelson Rockingham begins his 1800’s style apprenticeship to reviewing the erotic word. Nelson, the pen name of an irl friend of Matt’s, has for some reason chosen erotica as his introduction into the fruitless, draining world of internet article writing.)

Well, here we are. If you asked me 10 years, hell, 10 days ago if I would one day review erotica on the internet; I would probably have scoffed and asked where the hidden camera was. I can truly say that at the very least, this undertaking is an unexpected development in my life’s journey. I can only imagine how my high school English teachers would react if only they could see me now, writing the first of a yet-to-be-determined number of reviews on erotic fiction. They’d probably claim (in some pompous-ass voice) that they always knew that I was a deviant. Ha! Joke’s on them! This is the first time that I have ever read anything of this genre, and all of them are probably dead or divorced and alone now! But as this is my first time, let’s skip the foreplay, dive right in, and pop this metaphorical cherry. Please, be gentle.

What better to start on than a title that sounds scandalous itself, with all sorts of potential ethical and psychological dilemmas? Daddy’s Little Girl by Sorcha Rowan is a 7 page short story that centers around ‘Suzy’ a 32 year old lawyer. The story’s subtitle is a “DD/lg Fantasy Collection.” Out of curiosity, I blindly typed that phrase into Google with the safe search off. Turns out, it stands for a “Dad Dom/little girl” relationship, where the “Daddy” is firmly in control, and expects obedience from his “little girl”. This story fits perfectly into this category, and is really all of the backstory needed to understand the characters. Now, before the more pious in the audience cast their hellfire upon me and this story, it should be made clear: this is about role playing. Suzy and her partner are not actually father and daughter, because that’s totally gross. I know this spoiler of a revelation will likely be of some disappointment to our readers in West Virginia. There’s no use in crying over spilled milk or missed opportunities for incest, as they say; let us continue onward.

Our story begins when Suzy comes home late one evening. As one might expect, Daddy stayed up and waited for her to return. He’s disappointed, and worried from his “little girl” staying out so late. Suzy apologizes, and he then instructs her to change into her bed clothes, and rejoin him so he may read her a bedtime story…

Brief aside: Suzy is by all accounts a strong, independent woman. She’s a partner at her law firm, in an industry typically dominated by men. But when she gets home, she takes on a submissive, child-like character. It’s a bit of a role-reversal, and definitely not the last one featured in this story.

Suzy’s late arrival caused noted and sincere distress to her Daddy. In an attempt to ease his worried mind, she positions herself in a way with the intent to provide oral service to Daddy. But before she begins, she hesitates. This is a turning point for Suzy and her partner’s relationship. Up until now, their role play has been seemingly platonic. However, his raging hard-on betrays his desire to take things to the next level. He permits her to carry on, and she proceeds to blow him, all the way through to the end, swallowing his “present” as he calls it. But in her boldness to leave the platonic nature of their relationship, it would appear that she committed a transgression. One that she must atone for. And boy, does she ever atone.

So in this redemption story we’ve had an infraction, followed by punishment, and finally the reward for learning a lesson. Earlier, I mentioned Suzy’s role reversal from powerful lawyer to sexually submissive “little girl” would not be the last one we would see. That is because Daddy’s biggest kink…well it came as a bit of a surprise to me as well. Let’s just leave this at #unexpectedpegging. Since Suzy derives the most happiness from pleasing her Daddy, her reward is to satisfy his deepest desire…in blessed graphic detail.

Overall, Daddy’s Little Girl is a solid snippet of erotica. As a first-time reader of such literature, I obviously have nothing to compare it to. That being said, the plot and premise were clear, and given its length, spared no time getting to the raunchy stuff. Such acts were described in sufficient detail to imagine them in your mind’s eye without being beaten over the head with adjectives. If you enjoy dominant/submissive role play, or perhaps the taboo thought of sexual relations with a father/step-father figure, then it’s well worth your 10-15 minutes to give this hot story a read.

Did you enjoy Nelson’s first foray into erotic fiction? If so, be sure to like and share this post with your friends (especially grandparents) on social media!

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